Friday, 13 September 2019

Thoughts on Previous A2 Coursework Vids

Welshy Arms - Locked
By Simon, Christian and James




  • I like this section in on the battlements where they appear to be in multiple places at once, its a simple effect but really effective when cut to the beat

  • Throughout the video performance footage in the car park is shot from in front, then at the end to show the conflict in the relationship, and the emptiness of the break-up/death (or death of the relationship?) the 180 degree rule is broken and we are shown things from the singer's point of view, it really throws you off, I like that it was saved for the end

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Astrid S - Bloodstream
By Evie G


  • In the bridge of the song there are these shots with loads of layering, with out of focus lights, and different shots of Evie herself, they worked well to show depth to the emotions of the character after her relationship, being overwhelmed, feeling everything at once, and that tied in really nicely with the underwater shots (as though she's drowning in these feelings) and the bath shots
  • The 3rd person point of view shots of Evie, that feel as though she is being watched worked well,  especially since they're contrasted with the close-ups of her face where she is holding the camera. It was a notion of looking without being gratuitously voyeuristic, and the scenes where she is sexualised, she is sexualising herself (post-feminism)

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Suede - Just Can't Get Enough


  • I like that it's not heteronormative without being too simple
  • The image of eating the flower and spitting it out really sticks in your head
  • The diegetic ending is a bit of a mess with the sound editing and goes on for far too long, if I were to do that I would cut it down significantly


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Halsey - Control
by Adel




  • The mask with the smoke coming out of it is really brilliant
  • The use of either coloured smoke or paint powder is a really stunning visual too



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Bring Me The Horizon - Throne
by Kristian, Bronwen and Sophie




  • All the performance footage is really brilliant, with the painted-on tattoos for realism and the performers actually having learned sections of the song
  • The effect on the drums when he first starts playing looks really cool and ties in with goodwin's theory (amplification)
  • The slow-mo cross-cutting worked really well
  • There aren't a lot of narrative shots, maybe expanding on that could have been good, and the baking scene was a little too cheesy compared to the rest of the video which is edgy. This binary opposition works to make the lead singer appeal to a wider target audience, as he is not only edgy, but there could have been other ways of showing the couple doing cute things together
  • The paint powder is absolutely brilliant


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Oliver Hendon - Gecko (overdrive)
By Ida




  • I really liked this one overall
  • The way she sexualised herself, showing a lot of skin, and then completely shoved it in the audiences face by smearing the red stuff all over herself was really well done, if i were to do it though I would want to make it even more repellant, doing something like setting it up with a girl licking ice cream, to it eventually ending in her smearing the ice cream all over her face.
  • The performance footage of her outside was really good, the make-up looked professionally done and she definitely had a consistent aesthetic
  • The solo dancing shots of the break dancer were high quality, and the hand held camera really kept my attention on the screen (with the mix of hand held and tripod shots)


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Nine Inch Nails - Sunspots
by Joe




  • I also really liked this one
  • The face paint was simple but effective
  • During the bridge theres a bit where everything was rewinded and sped up and it just worked really well
  • the layering was one of the better ones from all the examples


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1 comment:

DB said...

Key to evidencing you’re applying K+U is consistently including something like POSSIBLE INFLUENCES as a heading (that can be negative points too: I will avoid…). The presentation is often good but inconsistent: some bold+pink T, then it stops. Try to check pics don't 'orphan' text as with the Welshly arms garage pic.
WA: Re 180 rule - so mention dis/continuity...
I agree that Evie's is a great eg to take inspiration from, notably the 3rd person point you note.
RD's: flower - gif or pic? Think WHY its striking; what point therefore can YOU take from this?
BMTH - you note slo-mo; do you see this in others (eg Evie's)? Does this seem especially significant or impactive?
Hendon - gaze>smearing makeup, maybe = deconstructionism? Why might she have used handheld?
NIN- gifs/pics?
You've picked out multiple useful points, illustrate them + sum up (at the top of the post)